smiLe foR a bEttEr dAy tomorrow!!











{November 10, 2006}   Tutorial 3!!!

hOhohO… aNother week is over!!! =D

We started off the lesson off by listening to the 50 word stories of some people and we were to write our own comments for them. I think that its easier to write out the positive things about the stories they wrote than to write out the negative points. I cannot think of any negative things since my own one should be have quite many negative things to write about… Next, each group were to present on Aristotle. Everybody is presenting so fast!!! I could not copy all the notes in time! Luckily, we can exchange our presentation slides after the lesson. The way the presentation goes is actually quite good. Ryan allows us to present first then he will explain it too with his own slides. This lets us have a better understanding. However, its a little confusing too.

woOo.. nExt assignment is people watch!!! I’ve started to watch people when I’m on my way to school or something. But most of the times, I always forgot about it and immerse myself in my own thoughts. Also, i find it difficult to observe people on the bus. It is so obvious!!! Have to obeserve them and on the same time, to avoid being noticed too. Furthermore, its difficult to find someone interesting to observe too since once you are outside, you tend to behave yourself and mind your actions as who knows, someone might just be looking at you. Somemore, i found out that ladies are less more interesting to watch for, perhaps they care more about their image??? HOhohoho… this assignment is hard in finding a suitable person to observe but its actually quite fun to observe people!!! but if i am being observed, its pretty scarryyyyyyyy… I will never know that are they forming bad impressions of me or even planning something bad…



Author: Sonia Yeo
Title: The stalker
What it’s about: A nerd wants to be the girl’s friend but is rejected. Taking it too hard, planning to kill her?
What works: able to understand it. The twist at the back is not expected
What doesn’t: The ending is a little too serious for this kind of matter.

Author: Vani
Title: Injustice
What it’s about: she is suffering from injustice and is dying.
What works: Good description
What doesn’t: Don’t know what the injustice she felt.
 She wrote about the thoughts and feelings and not about the injustice she felt.

Author: Colin
Title: Younger brother deserves it
What it’s about: the younger brother irritates the older brother by asking a lot of questions.
What works: the story does link together from a pencil to the punch. It is easily apprehended and is realistic.
What doesn’t: too much dialogue. But is it too violent for a brother to punch the younger brother just because he is irritating him?

Author: Pradip
Title: Knockout
What it’s about: he loses a boxing match and is knocked out.
What works: description of how he is being knocked out – can visualize it. The ending is good, it tells us it’s a boxing match rather than just a normal fight.
What doesn’t work: doesn’t really mention what career is it. Too many ‘he’.



et cetera